several awkwardnesses

By: crunchgodabruinknees

in the quote

First, It doesnt say "Our total focus". It says "my". Leaders get people to buy into their vision so it becomes theirs or ours not  "my".

Second, wtf does "of the game'" mean anyway? Its odd an unclear.

Third, "total focus" is also odd unclear drivel.

Last the focus should be excellence. discipline is a part but not the entire aspect of excellence. 

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